It's a ok track. like the melody.
although it lacks fluency, something to keep it together, some it's all cutted down in the same pattern and me dont likey that;) keep it up, and you'll achieve someting;)
Yehh... I was trying to keep it pretty simple. This is going to be used as an intro to a podcast.
Joyful as son of a bitch
Its extremely joyful nature truly moved my heart;) i like it a lot, though, i would work on masttering the channels, add some balance and so. (for easy mastering you can use a Yamaha Final Master plugin, it has some great presets, and with some work, you could get a awful lot out of it)
Feel free to listen to my stuff;)
as puristic as it gets
Well, if it was a music just for art of it, i'd give it a 6/10 and 3/5. But as a game tune, it's pretty well going, so it's 8/10 and 4/5 from me. I liked thw sweeps much. Kepp it going, and listen/review my stuff!
Thanks. I'm pretty new to the music scene here on newgrounds. But I'm learning and feedback is great. This is truly my first piece of music ever.
Well its cool piece, although i found that a few minor glitches had slipped in:
The bends are god damn cheese, and unless they were ment to be that way i would shorten them. Also the pulse (or is it square?) is kinda flat, it would be better i youadded some depth to 'em.
for the scrap or sketch it's awesome!
Overall note: 7/10 4/5
and feel welcome to run through my 'kinda 8-bit but not really' mp3's
I'll probably check it out. The slides were indeed meant to be kind of long, as a build up. I ended up not actually giving it anything to build up to, so I'm not sure why I left it. Like I said, feedback like that is really helpful, I'll most likely shorten them now.
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