it's ok
It's a ok track. like the melody.
although it lacks fluency, something to keep it together, some it's all cutted down in the same pattern and me dont likey that;) keep it up, and you'll achieve someting;)
it's ok
It's a ok track. like the melody.
although it lacks fluency, something to keep it together, some it's all cutted down in the same pattern and me dont likey that;) keep it up, and you'll achieve someting;)
Thanks.
Yehh... I was trying to keep it pretty simple. This is going to be used as an intro to a podcast.
Joyful as son of a bitch
Its extremely joyful nature truly moved my heart;) i like it a lot, though, i would work on masttering the channels, add some balance and so. (for easy mastering you can use a Yamaha Final Master plugin, it has some great presets, and with some work, you could get a awful lot out of it)
8/10
4/5
Feel free to listen to my stuff;)
Quite coull
Well its cool piece, although i found that a few minor glitches had slipped in:
The bends are god damn cheese, and unless they were ment to be that way i would shorten them. Also the pulse (or is it square?) is kinda flat, it would be better i youadded some depth to 'em.
for the scrap or sketch it's awesome!
Overall note: 7/10 4/5
and feel welcome to run through my 'kinda 8-bit but not really' mp3's
I'll probably check it out. The slides were indeed meant to be kind of long, as a build up. I ended up not actually giving it anything to build up to, so I'm not sure why I left it. Like I said, feedback like that is really helpful, I'll most likely shorten them now.
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