it's ok

It's a ok track. like the melody.
although it lacks fluency, something to keep it together, some it's all cutted down in the same pattern and me dont likey that;) keep it up, and you'll achieve someting;)

Joyful as son of a bitch

Its extremely joyful nature truly moved my heart;) i like it a lot, though, i would work on masttering the channels, add some balance and so. (for easy mastering you can use a Yamaha Final Master plugin, it has some great presets, and with some work, you could get a awful lot out of it)
8/10
4/5

Feel free to listen to my stuff;)